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  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Depressed

    Whoa, I love this. I struggle with depression as well, and just being able to relate to your poem already tells me that this was orchestrated with sincerity. I can't ...

    Mar 16, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Strange Fears

    Hello! I would like to begin by complimenting your beautiful rhyme scheme. My main criticism here is in the line "My fears revolve around being loved and such". The "And ...

    Mar 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: ItcouldveBeenYou

    ooooh my goodnesssss, I love how you put the title of the poem hidden within the beginning letters! I don't have a lot of experience critiquing poetry. (and by that, ...

    Mar 4, 2024


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