MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very similar to the incredible YWS S'more Method but I have Halloween-ified it and made it spooky! My little black cat friend, Vladimir, wants to offer his opinion on your amazing literary piece:
Mystical Witch Hat - What I See, Observe, and Interpret
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem <3 My first impression I want to share is how heartfelt this poem felt to me. I really appreciate you sharing this!
Inside, a storm rages - silent, out of sight.
Outside, a mask - smiling with all its might.
I love these lines. Storm to sight. Mask to might. Silent and smiling! The alliteration is so strong. I love the flow. I love how you use opposite words to make a point. Though in a storm, you act silent. You are unseen. You wear this exhausting mask and smile externally.
I noticed you use a very unique rhyme pattern here, it seems to go AAABBBCCC and then the last four lines, there is a loose rhyme between sucks and dust, followed by up, and then just. I wonder, was disrupting the rhyme scheme intentional at the end? There can definitely be a lot of symbolism in that.
Vladimir’s Advice - Suggestions for Improvement
There are three lines in this poem that do not end with periods, while every other line does. Perhaps adding commas or periods to the end of these sentences.
Cloudy days when the sun shines bright
And
Invisible feelings consume the soul
And lastly, this one:
But once in a while, the light opens up
Jack O’Lanterns - My Favourite Parts and Praises
By day they hide - their shadows bold.
She wonders why these emotions come.
I love this! It really shows the day by day of how this girl feels. I love the idea of shadows being bold. That is a really beautiful, and painful, image <33
Black Cat Cuddles - Concluding Ideas and Thoughts
Thanks for sharing this, friend! Hope you have a great rest of your day!
Sincerely,
-Ellie
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