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Thanks for reading, after reading how about how no one was running or panicking I decided to twist things up a bit.

Thanks for reading it, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will try to cut down on the massive character descriptions.

Yeah I liked it, I like nearly all battle stories or chapters. Unfortunately I haven't read any others of yours.

No, I didn't mean to be rude. Mine is far from perfect. It's just I wanted to let you know, I don't really know what else to do in a ...

Okay, I like the story and concept; Although I think it needs a little bit more character description. Besides that it's pretty good, I look forward to more chapters.

Ok thanks.

Okay it needs a more detailed description, like skin tone, and what they wear. "What on Earth Were you doing," asked his mom? "I Don't care what You're name is." ...