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Dear Ashley529, Your lyrics were good, but before you ever write the lyrics of a song, you will have to write the Artist, too so that people can understand who ...

Hello, your sister here. I spotted the first line and I think it's a mistake. Please remember the 'think' there if it isn't. Kaito dropped soundlessly to his knees, all ...

Oi, it's you sister here. Your story is great and everything, but there is one thing wrong with it. It's too much like James Patterson' s series, Maximum Ride. Don't ...

Dear Warrior Princess, Your poem is just great! I love it! By everything I have read till now in this poem, I can guess that you are a Christian, aren't ...

Dear AlexBlack, Your story idea is really good, but you, could add a little bit of information in the beginning, like where the main character was and where she was ...

Dear LisaMCooper, I agree with songbird102. The overall story is great but the words get jumbled at times and is hard to understand. Anyways it's great and I hope that ...

Dear Kaitlin, Your poem is great! Continue writing poems like this. There is no punctuation mistake, but like TheWalkinDude said, it's best to avoid the question mark, if you are ...

Dear TheMadcap, Your story doesn't really make any sense, like bro has said, and there are many ways you can use to improve it, like correcting your grammar. Here's a ...

Dear cupcake, Peacocks is a very cute poem! And I have the faintest idea that, you already love peacocks. Anyways, There is just one teensy mistake you made. C- Can ...

Dear cupcake, You poem is great. Even though your poem is short, It makes a lot of sense, And your poem is in, the future tense. I know my poem ...

Dear TheWalkinDude, Your story was really funny. I liked it a lot, but I think you should notice a one thing I saw when reading your story. It was going ...

Dear the doctor, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. ...

Dear Ilovebubbles123, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. I ...

Dear yasminahmed, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your short story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. ...

Dear TedusCloud, My name is VStarfirix. As much as I have read of your short story, it is very good. But, I have a lot of questions to ask you. ...