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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Villain

    I really enjoyed this! I've been going through some rough stuff lately and this is a very sweet point of view on why people are mean to other people. It ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Save Your Work.

    I think this is a really great way to describe how frustrating writing can be. Having all these thoughts going through your head, but not at the time when it's ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: I am Converting my Religion

    I understand how people would find this offensive, but I thought it was silly and amusing. It doesn't come off to me as actually making fun of things from a ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: unedited

    This made me smile, I like how it's put together. Kind of choppy, but still has a really nice vibe all together. I like your use of metaphors throughout, it ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Where am I?

    The first paragraph reminds me either of being incredibly depressed and in your own crappy mind set, or possibly vampires? Ha. Did you mean living a life more miserable than ...

    Apr 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If God Was A Rapper

    I really enjoyed this. I don't claim any religion or claim to be religious, but I'm also not an "atheist" or "agnostic" but the subject matter is pretty fascinating. Starting ...

    Apr 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Like

    I've read this through a few times and each time it made me smile. It's really well written, and sweet. It's a good way to get your feelings out, perhaps ...

    Apr 23, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Wal-mart ain't too fun

    Haha I loved this! It definitely captures the whole atmosphere and vibe of being at Wal-Mart. The line "why give positive feedback, when it seems like we don't care" especially ...

    Apr 22, 2015
  • Other » Literature, General Re: Hotels

    Apr 22, 2015


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