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I don't like fantasy (at all) but this was kind of cool. I love the name Laxus - very interesting. This sentence - 'Laxus let hissed through his teeth.' doesn't ...

Woah... this was like reading something like Lord of the Rings. I don't know much about fantasy but this piece was so dark, so mysterious, and yet so empowering in ...

Oooh, interesting! Dark and dreamy and mysterious. I have to admit I was confused by the relationship between Jareth and Claudia at first - I first thought he was a ...

That was pretty intense, there's kind of a lot going on in this story. Maybe too much... but I'll leave that up to you. In the first few sentences the ...

Woah, that was a really cool story. It flowed beautifully. There was a lot of imagery which made me imagine I was there the whole time and could actually see ...

What a beautiful poem to read. I especially love the word 'wavelet'! I've never heard it before, it just sounds nice on your tongue to say it! I enjoyed the ...

That was a good essay - the title definitely caught my eye, as this is an interesting topic to write about. I think you had a fairly put-together thesis, however ...