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Re: Black Stone
It's okay but it's you which isn't okay :!: This is what I have to say:
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: A Summer Day
Do you guys think that this even has a chance, or should I just give up on it? Thank you for the comments!
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: The Baseball Bat
**UPDATED**
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: The Baseball Bat
First of all, Jamie did not kill her father. And second, you will see why the bat only has one blood sample on it. I think I'm going to reverse ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: The Rhythm of Life
**UPDATED**
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Asthma
OK I updated it, with a little more detail.
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: 1,2
I also agree with cadmium. This is not poetry. It's just a continued children's rhyme. Furthermore, it makes no sense whatsoever.
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: a to zzzzzzzzzz
That was a good approach, but you need to be serious. Stop posting junk!
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: U.R
Fishface- Stop. Just stop. The junk you post as either already been written or is just dumb. Stop before you are kicked out of here for good.
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Luna
Great. You have amazing talent, and I loved the whole '5 Things You Should Know About Me' thing. I personally think you should have waited to explain why you don't ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Lonely Violin
I love how the behavior of the violin is related to the feelings of the player. Amazing rhyming; I don't think I could make a rhyming poem as long as ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Just a small pieceform one of my storys
I loved the vivid verbs and the fact that you used coversation, but the conversations lack depth. 'I love you, John' and 'It's you! It's all your fault!' can be ...
Apr 4, 2007