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Thank you so much for leaving a review! This is my first time posting a story, so it is kind of you to leave some feedback! It is true, I ...

Currently working on the rest!

Beautiful. Emotional. Creative. I can go on forever! It is about love and loyalty, is my guess! I love the pattern, syllables, and rhythem! I have a question though, what ...

Sure!

Very relatable. I love the rhyming and how you described it. It is so true that they pretend to understand, even though they don't know anything about how I feel. ...

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Of course! I will check out some of your others

It's okay. Thanks!

Some tips maybe? I'm currently working on book 2 the Ravens Shadow

Can you give me examples of how to make my story even better? I just reread some of the things to point out part of the review. There is something ...

Honestly, FOR REAL. I wrote a book like 4 years ago, and I read back and it was so embarrassing lol. I used to copy off Warrior Cats and Wings ...

Thank you for giving me tips to improve my writing. I should've included more tribes and more territory, plus more descriptive writing, you are absolutely right! This is my first ...

The rest of the story is already out. Read this first, then read the others! I am having problems making a map, I will figure it out later. Thank you ...

Thank you so much for the review! The rest of the story is already out if you want to read it! I am making a series and the second book ...

I posted all the rest of the chapters