veeren

yes yes, the daddy was an alcoholic, and i shall look in to those edits xp thanks!

double srsly

srsly

come now, we dont applaud poetry, we snap or is that just another lie ive been taught by the system

*snaps*

boom that was awesome xp

ehh, i had to write that or else i'd have wrote something that's actually offensive >.> and i will break that narrator-writer stereotype, ooooone day.

must you mock me e.e it seems the format does indeed attract controversy. while i like it personally, others find it confusing. im going to need a way to balance ...

alrighty. the whole use of italics and whatnot was to draw the readers attention to those certain terms and phrases. as it is more of a rant just written in ...

I must remember to comment on this later >.>

mini

I thank you for your compliments and your criticisms. I'll have to look more into the style next time :p Thanks again.

my phone did it for me And not telling xp

the next time you complain about grammar in poetry I will shoot something. but eehhhh you're kinda there kinda not xp

I ain't no poet, but I'll take your advice anyway xp