vannilawriter

Nonono it wasn%u2019t repetitive at all, I appreciate it. I have trouble noticing it unless someone points it out. Thank you for the wonderful review

I def go the same feelings about the flowers that you did, but who knows. As for tense I always struggle with that lol, so thank you :).

If I%u2019m being entirely honest, I%u2019m not even really sure if nothing is a character or not, and I wrote it lol. Every person I%u2019ve showed this too has read ...

thank you so much for the review, that was actually the first line that popped up into my head when I decided to write this short story.

First and Foremost, I want to say that the feelings expressed in this poem are common descriptions of symptoms of clinical depression. If you feel this way, you should know ...

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Thanks for taking the the time to review. I haven%u2019t had a chance for an edit quite yet, but once I do I will be sure to fix thing you ...

sorry for typos in my response. i voice dictated it. but i realized i forgot to actually answer the points you raised. Im aware that the speaker makes certain assumptions, ...

i cant wait to see what you do with this wonderful story

thank you for the review. this story came from some person experience with suicidal thoughts, so many of his though are ones i had at one time. as for encoring ...

thanks for the review, Im terrible at grammar, but the other stuff i will work on. and as for the suicide stuff, Im not considering but i have struggled before ...

yeah, its really good. :)