vannilawriter

WOW! Stunning use of imagery and metaphor. I felt like I was discovering new with each line. I have a difficult relationship with both of my parents (I don’t speak ...

I’m rather stunned by the quality of this piece. It’s dense and academic while still remaining entertaining and fun, and I feel that meets the goal of educating its readers ...

Focusing specifically on the First poem, I absolutely love the imagery. I think the gentle personification at the beginning really sets the tone for what you have going on in ...

You took a well overdone premise and really breathed life into it with this one. I enjoyed this immensely and am definitely going to read more of your work after ...

If I ever needed an example of how to perfectly use satire to make poignant commentary on an issue within a culture this is what i would use. As someone ...

I love this concept so much!!!!!!1 The suspense of it all really makes me excited to see more from you so I hope you decide to continue this story. With ...

I like the premise quite a bit. where I'm caught slightly is the execution. This piece has great potential, but one thing you need to work on is the flow ...

with the amount of meticulous imagery in this short it would be safe to assume that you cold describe color to a blind man. I loved this piece a whole ...

First off, I REALLY enjoyed this poem. I personally think your word choice expressed a unique voice that complements the subject matter quite well. The flow was good for the ...

hey there, right off the bat I am noticing a lack of punctuation, which makes it hard to read and comprehend what is happening. I could have missed it, but ...