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this is a super promising start! the way you wrote the relationship between Rosalyn and her little brother Asher feels so real and relatable, especially that mix of sibling guilt ...

This is SO GOOD!! The way you showed Tara’s relief and enjoyment through the dresses, makeup, and so much more is incredible. She knew her family wouldn’t like her in ...

This is a very loving chapter. The descriptions of everything are incredibly detailed and well done. You made sure that the reader wouldn’t get confused and would have great imagery. ...

Hey so this is ABSOLUTELY stunning, but wow, it’s so heavy and heartbreaking. You did really good job with building up the tension! Starting with that quote from the cousin ...

I love how you played with the layout here—scattering the words all over the page forces you to slow down and really take each one in. That contrast between harsh ...

I love the unique spacing and scattering of the text forces the reader to slow down and take in every single word. ALSO, title "wolf" is the perfect setup because ...

SOO beautifully sad and clever. Personifying "Avoidance" as a toxic lover or friend that you just can't shake off is such a smart way to write about dealing with mental ...

Woww, this poem is super emotional and really makes you stop and think. I love how it takes huge, heavy topics like immigration and belonging, but speaks about them in ...

This poem has a really dark and eerie vibe that feels like a scene from a fantasy book! I like how you use a lot of sensory details, like the ...

While reading this, I imagined being/feeling invisible in a crowded room. The way it's written is very straightforward, which actually makes the whole thing feel way more genuine and personal. ...