unsocialbutterfly

Wow. That's amazing. Your writing kind of reminds me of mine. It's kind of silly and stupid but your poem makes me feel better haha. Anyways your poem is amazing. ...

Hi! Wow that's really good. It really makes you stop and stare. The eyes are gorgeous and as mentioned before by other people they just really pop against the gray. ...

haha yeah most people would describe that as a nerd. I hate the word nerd and stereotypes but putting that aside it's a good poem. Please tell me you don't ...

I'm not exactly a song writer and I'm not good at review poems or songs but I think this is really great. I really like this and it seems like ...

Your story was really great and touching. I liked it. The only thing I saw was this: The road way flailed beneath me but I did my best. But besides ...

Okay, it sounds like you are going to have a really good story line and please don't be discouraged by the corrections I'm going to give you. It was not ...

I found a few grammatical mistakes but besides that it sounds like your book is going to be great. :) a constant serge of horns echoed as their angry occupants ...

Your second chapter was pretty good. I'm glad you kept writing. The first chapter was tough but I saw you edited it. I don't think I have anymore to add ...

Your story seemed pretty good to me. Keep writing I want to know what happens ;) Here's what I noticed could need a little improvement: slammed my locker door and ...

Hi! Your writing seems pretty good. I did notice that this sentence just doesn't sound right. Any one in this family rarely goes up there, as to disturb her as ...

Your poem is pretty good. :) I'm really sorry about your mom :/But anyway about your poem it's pretty good but like when you say "you get soaked with all ...

That's a really pretty and inspiring piece. There's a comma at the end though so did you do it on purpose or is there more to it? Other than that ...

hi! :) This story was pretty good. It was really cute. There are some mistakes in grammar but other than that it's cute. :) Examples: as she smiled at me ...

hey :) This is pretty well written but it kind of sounds more like a poem than a short story it is pretty good though I like the fact that ...