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Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review! So lets start off with the nitpicks: You never specified who is speaking here, Kyle or Lyoko- “Now while you train here in this ...

Unpublished person here to review chapter 6! First off, I liked how you mentioned the crashed plane. It really asked some good questions- did it crash before the power vanished, ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review! I was really hooked by the previous chapter, so I am glad to see that this is finally up! I enjoyed this one a ...

Greeting, unpublishedperson here to review! Honestly, I think there was far too little here for me to really formulate an opinion about this. The one thing that really caught my ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review, because I reviewed the previous installment and I couldn't help but be drawn in a second time! Racen, at that moment spun round and ...

Hi there, Unpublished person here to review chapter 5! This was, as usual, a very enjoyable chapter, and it was fun to see Lydia kick some ass. Now, a few ...

Hey there, unpublishedperson here to review chapter 4! So first off, I liked that you had some more info on Karu, its good that your showing what has come out ...

Hey there, Unpublished person here to review! First off, the good things. I thought this was an interesting theme to deal with, and it looked like something that you have ...

Hi there, Unpublishedperson here to review! First off, the farming competition was handled nicely on the whole. I was really interested in the new character of Cora, and I hope ...

Unpublished person here to review! (again) Glad to see this up so soon, glad that I didn't have to wait! 1. I really liked the world-building that you did in ...

Hi there, Unpublishedperson here to review! Overall, this had all of the things that I like to see in a first chapter. I got a good sense of who Gloria ...

This was, overall, a pretty fabulous story, though there were a few areas that I felt could be improved. I really liked the concepts of the skyris and of ascension, ...

Hello, unpublished-person here to review! Overall I felt that this worked well as a humor piece, once it was clear to me that this was intended to be a humor ...

Here to review! First off, I felt that this piece had almost everything that your average "first chapter" needs. You clearly have read a good deal of starting chapters, and ...

Here for my first review! First off, I thought that this piece started off very strong. The phrase "Rainbows were the lucky ones" really caught my attention and made me ...