unluminescent

thank you! I think I will add some spaces in the last stanza :)

thank you! I'm definitely hoping to elaborate more on the story when I have time, so I'll keep in mind to add some questions :)

haha the "Where I'm From" outline is very common :)

Thank you!

This is too cute! I just love the ending. :)

thank you so much! I'm definitely hoping to continue this story, go into more detail, etc... your feedback (as well as Elinor's) will definitely come into play if I do ...

thank you for your feedback! this was a tragedy that was an assignment for my creative writing class, so I had to limit my page count as much as I ...

this is so sweet, thank you! I added those parentheses to fit the basic outline of this "type of poem" (it was an assignment for my creative writing class in ...

thank you for your feedback! I strayed from using too much imagery so that I could better fit the basic outline for this "type" of poem :) I'll definitely read ...

This poem is very thought-provoking. I LOVE the repetition of the "How does it feel to fly?" Great job!