ultraviolet

Dare I go against another reviewer? Yes, there's not a lot going on here, but since the writing itself is so beautiful, I think it works. It has a dreamy, ...

So, once again, I want to commend you on your dialogue. But instead of how it transmits information, just it in general. You don't have a lot of dialogue tags ...

Okay, so I want to commend you on a couple things. First of all, I like the direction this is taking me. It's good. I'm interesting in seeing what happens ...

Just so you know, I have written this review out for you - I just wrote it in a notebook. Don't ask why. Just, sometimes things are easier to write ...

Hey there, Cal! Until you revise this, I'm not going to do a whole, complete nitpick thing, because you could change half the things. Instead, I'll nitpick recurring problems. “Hello?” ...

Hey there, modern! Adonis awkwardly patted her arm, not knowing what to do . He thought about leaving her alone, but the fragile, lost look in Calypso's eyes changed his ...

Hey there! Okay, so I have a few things off about this chapter. 1. They mention how their think mortal-Calpyso is immortal-Calypso because she's a pretty Greek girl about the ...

Hey there! Okay, so first off, we get that this is going to be heavily into Greek mythology - but Calypso and Cerberus? I didn't mention anything last chapter because ...

Hey there! Sorry it's taken me so long to get here. I blame my short attention span. Like seriously, I read it over a week ago, and I've come back ...

Hey there! Sorry it's taken so long to get here. Okay, so pretty much all of my comments are general, not really chapter by chapter or anything. I'm going to ...

Hey there! So I'm really liking the concept - the different worlds and how they've adapted to them; how we're not the normal ones, and our gravity is almost nothing ...

Hey there! I’d like to think that my part in everything started when Sheila Atkins came to wake me up. This is a good, catching line, but whenever I read ...

Hey there! I don't know exactly how much you consider generally general, so sorry if I point out things you would rather were not. Through the wall, the High Prince ...

This isn't going to be overly long because, well, there's not much to comment on. (I hope you're happy - you're making me look like a crappy reviewer, thanks so ...

Hey Skinsles! Okay, so I may be misinterpreting things (okay, I probably am... >.>) but the way I read this, Zoey was hiding at the beginning. Which, how could Luke ...