tzipwrite

Hey Elysium, tzipwrite here for a review. Loved this poem. I actually lost a cousin recently and have been pondering the concept of condolences, sadness, and loss. Everyone says "Sorry ...

Hey, tzipwrite here, LOVED the poem. The rhyming is great. I loved the imagery and characterization are vivid and colorful! I loved the line "With rosy-red ribbons in her waving ...

I really enjoyed this poem! I think the fact that you only capitalized the beginning of an actual sentence was nice. Just at the end "I scoop up the ashes ...