tyeguy06

alright, should be mostly fixed. this took a while but i'm happy with it.

thanks this was originally chapter 1 but at the end i couldn't decide where i wanted them to go so i dubbed it the prolog and moved ahead a bit ...

This is a great opening to this world, i look forward to reading more of it when it's published. if you have other stories in the universe that i can ...

This made me and my mother laugh, i love the devil went down to Georgia and i like a lot of parody songs and i can safely say good sir, ...

thank you for the feedback, this was on paper written as a script type dialogue and i'm converting it over to this style so my grammar admittedly sucks, but i'm ...