twistedracer01

Great job. More great poems and it made spotlight. you seem to keep getting better could you help me because well... ... ... I suck at writeing :P Anyway good ...

Well, again you keep getting better. So nice job keeping issues with charicters nice and mistereouse (I like that) and this really hits close to home. I was kinda feeling ...

Ok cool just wanted to know

Sorta yea

I was just asking why this topic. I tend to go twords the super natural

WOW this was a great chapter. I want to read the others! But I have one question. Why? (I dont mean this in a bad way) The chapter is great ...

hey guys please give a sudgestion for were it should go from here

Hey I was wondering if you guys wanted me to make a charicter byase. if so Let me know thx

To everyone whos posted. Thank you for the help and replys and i will be giving 64 points to the three rplyers

thx i need revews like these so thanks again

Yup and no problem

Ok good job , aliitle short but i dont read poetry alot so it might actually be pretty long. But any way why repeat "Don’t you remember me? The bagel ...

Really good book. The plot was great and the charicters were intresting. And the mysterious vibe is great

No prb

Great book and dark (i like that) and great ending (HUGE cliff hanger)