twiggers

First off, I love the title. Second, I love the poem, but it kind of confused me... are you trying to do a rhymey poem? It kind of sounded like ...

Yay, Simba!!! Okay, as much as I hate the idea of an old Simba.... *shivers* I thought that this was very well written. The flow was perfecto, and it did ...

I really liked this story!! I feel like scratching my arms when you talk about the ants... gross!! Still, I thought it was very skillfully written, and I love the ...

That was really good!! And thank you so much for describing the blood-sucking in such vivid detail!! It's just the thing I want after lunch!! But really, you did a ...

Okay, first off, I am a huge HP junkie, and I thought this was absolutely wonderful! Congrats on your first piece, and welcome to YWS! Now on to the nitpicking… ...

8. Women secretly control the men in their life. - This is true. Even those controlling men who want to dominate, they don't really. Behind every man's good decision, there's ...

Harry Potter was in the forbidden forest looking for his beloved, Hermonie. He heard someone walking behind him. Crack, some leaves crunched under his feet. He turned around and felt ...

The cars flashed by in mixed blurs. I strained my eyes down the road, desperately. I kept on telling myself that there had to be a way out of this. ...

I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named after my great father, Edmund Roberts, a soldier in some war or something. I know ...

"No get off me! Leave me alone- Darren you messed up not me, there is nothing left between us if there ever was anything.." I hissed hatred making my eyes ...

I like it. Original and well... zesty. I really like this line, but *weeeooooowwweeeeooooo* (that was the grammar siren) GRAMMAR ERROR! “Stupid? I’M being stupid? You’re the one jumping around, ...

Okay, this is worst as in sad, not worst as in a I've-read-the first chapter-and-it-is-so-boring-that-i-want-to-put-it through-the-paper-shredder-even-though-it's-a-library-book book. This book was sa

I loved it! I cried when tonks, lupin, and george (or was it fred?) died. I loved the part where Harry's in the pond during december, and ron pulls him ...

I thought it was a very nice start. Intriguing and emotional... Personally, I like stories that have more dialouge, but that's just me... Also about what you said in the ...

The Series of Unfortunate Events. They killed it when they made the movie. I completly agree. Also all the Narnia movies, and the Happy Potter movies, the directors killed them, ...