turtlethatroars

Thanks so much for the great review! I really appreciate it, and shall take your advice into consideration. ^_^

Thanks for your opinion, it matters a lot to me what people think. :D

Thank you for the awesome review! I shall definitely take your advice into consideration! :)

Thanks for the feedback. I am aware of what semi-colons are used for and I am also aware that I have creative licence to format it and punctuate it in ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! And when you said it left you speechless I hope I didn't leave you breathless as well ;) Sorry I had to throw that little ...

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the feedback!! ^_^

You're welcome! :)

Thank you so much for this review, it means a lot to me!! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I shall take your suggestion into consideration! c:

Thanks for the review! Yes I have experienced heartbreak in the past and I am currently in the situation I wrote about! And it's fine if you can't find anything ...

No problem.

Thank you so much for the suggestions! I thought I wasn't going to get anybody to critique this piece and that kinda worried me, but you did! Thanks, I appreciate ...

Yeah, that's what that part is getting at. I had no intention of putting the link thingy in there, that is just something my computer does on it's own. It ...

The part that is your favorite actually caused me to most trouble. I had a really difficult time figuring out where to put it so it wouldn't sound horrible. I ...

Well that works too! Haha. So I will add the "and" into that line because I understand what you mean, and that will make it sound better. You are also ...

I didn't mean to be repetitive in that first part so I shall change it to what you suggested! Also when I said The strain is more. I was referring ...