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Re: Lies
I think this is a really interesting piece. I enjoy the ambiguity of it where the reader is never quite given what the speaker is lying about. I'll admit I ...
May 7, 2019 -
Re: scream
I completely relate to this. Sometimes I feel like a walking contradiction. It seems like the juxtaposition between excess noise and the absence of it is just so hard to ...
May 7, 2019 -
Re: short story opening chapter.
Some quick editing things, in the first paragraph, wondered I think should be wandered. the phrase "swung back and forwards" sounds smoother as "swung forwards and back". Other than those ...
May 7, 2019 -
Re: Missing One
A quick typo to note: I'm sure tears should be years in the first sentence. I appreciate the unsaid that is left in the wake of the actions of the ...
May 5, 2019
