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Re: From Time to Time part 3: The Birthday
Hi lydiachale1234, I loved your story. However, I did notice a few things that could be fixed. For one, I noticed that in the very first sentence, you used a ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Mei
Hi AnnaH3, I just read your story, and I loved it, but noticed a few things. For one, I saw that in several places, you used present tense verbs, when ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: The Secret Daughter
Hi elliexoxo, I read your story, and I noticed a few things. First of all, I wanted to let you know that I love your story, and your style of ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Mei, part I
Hi lilbean, I read your story, "Mei". I thought that there was a bit too much happening in such a short time. For example, I noticed that you skipped straight ...
Mar 14, 2016