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Darkness covered the midnight sky, only allowing specks of light from the eerie street lights to break it’s cover. The stars had no effect, for the sun would not bless ...

I'm not going to stand here and watch you burn The first thing I thought when I read this line was Why is she singing I love the way you ...

For being written in six minutes (and thirty-four seconds) this was pretty awesome. It does need to be edited, but since the person ^above^ has already revised it, I won't. ...

Review is in BOLD, comments in italics. How did this happen? I shook my head, unable to comprehend what had happened to me. My brain felt all fuzzy and distant. ...

Review is in BOLD, comments are in italics! You would think, for me to be here right now, I'd have to be dreaming... cause that's what I thought. Being in ...

This was so... awesome. That's literally the best word to decribe this. I really loved all of the contradictions! I like how it starts with one simple word and then ...

To say I loved this would be an understatement. Lol :) If this was sold in stores I would def buy it!! Keep up the good work! Loved the second ...

LibbyLovesDrums- Again, a good chapter :) I cannot wait to read more about Victoria. I love how you leave the audience wondering! Keep writing! ~ Taylor (TRH Writes)

LibbyLovesDrums---- I really liked this first chapter because the one thing it makes me want to do is read the second! I was left in suspense, wondering what BJ's parents ...

Not here to review; just to say: Wow. That was such a good story to begin with, and everyone already think they know what's going to happen. The last paragraph ...

Wondering if you would review some of my work. . . I have two novels in the works. Finding You is under general fiction and Untouchable is under romance. Thanks ...

Dear all~ I guess this was exceptional. Just growing up with you. Remember when we first met? All timid newcomers on the first day of high school? There was Marcie, ...

Okay, overall I thought this piece could have been great with a little work. It had a nice plot, a solid character that we're starting to get a feel for, ...