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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Visiting Mother

    This poem was very well written! I'm not sure if you are writing from experience, but it's definitely very personal, and easy to relate to! Definitely keep writing, this is ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Opening the door

    I agree with the other reviews, you were able to put so much emotion and feeling into the poem, and it was very easy to relate to, I think you ...

    Sep 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Perfect Girl

    This is really good! Its what every girl wants to hear! and it is very heart warming and wonderful! Love it!!

    Sep 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I really liked this poem! I don't know if you've read the novel The Namesake but your poem really connects with it!

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Lipstick on His Collar

    This poem is really good! it expresses so much emotion in so few words! excellent!

    Sep 11, 2011


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