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Since you insist on posting your undirected and horribly misspelled diatribes here, I'm going to review this as a piece. Firstly, grammar. You've already showed your disdain for grammatical convention

Hey there ZYLF ;) The main problem here is that you're trying to espouse several ideas, but you seem to lack depth of analysis on any one of them. Before ...

No! Not the movie! It is very, very loosely based on the book. The plot is significantly different. It's still an enjoyable action flick. I adore Asimov. He was one ...

Bravo! This was the first thing that made me smile all day. You are working under a tight word limit, so I'm not going to ask you to change anything. ...

I do not know what this post is meant to be, but from what I can see it seems to be your honest opinion. I think it is petty, childish ...

I'm not going to go through typo's or grammatical errors, although I spotted a few. I enjoyed this story. You seemed able to provide an insight into this man's final ...

Skywagg. From what I see from this piece, you're an atheist looking for a debate. You started this post talking about the insignificance of humanity in a vast universe, and ...

This was a really humorous read, and a nice take on the personality of Shel Silverstein. You told the story in a casual and comical tone of voice, and it ...

This was a beautiful piece, just what I would expect from you Azila. You didn't mention it, but I'm guessing Kira is blind? Anyway, onto the review. Plot/Storyline So obviously ...

Meh. Unrealistic. MC had so many chances to kill Chad earlier, while going through the building, why didn't he. He had to wait for special forces to turn up? You ...

I tend to review works without reading the other reviews first, so forgive me if I repeat anything said above. Storyline/Plot Angels, flying humans and birdmen are becoming the new ...

The title should be Thientithtth assuming Igors lisp on every s. Anyway, great mini-scenario. I can't help wondering, were you influenced by Terry Pratchett's books? Your Igors and mad scientists ...

Nice take on a one night stand. That's what I interpreted it as; am I right? "Secondhand regrets, dusted off by morning light -" Wouldn't the 'secondhand regrets' occur in ...

You lack any back story. The plot is not meaningful, or interesting. Students playing a prank on their principle by sending a magic penguin to beat him up? Really? The ...

Hey, another atheist in the house here. Small Typo: An Atheist not a atheist. Well it's interesting to see someone talk from this point of view. One thing I find ...