toukyo

Hm I guess we are taught differently then but okay

Ah I see. It's okay to get constructive criticism I guess and I understand your view point. I left it quite "blank" because I originally intended readers to think of ...

ah yes i agree, that the poem could feel rather incomplete. I shall work on that and thank you very much

thank you for your words (:

No problem, I am looking forward for your next poem

Hi, I'm new here and I just happened to come across this poem. This is not meant to offend you but I feel like the poem requires more emotion, you ...