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This is a great poem, and I love how you made it so lyrical and rhyme-ie. It's so hard for me to get the right rhymes all the time, maybe ...

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Overall I was a bit confused about this piece and the meaning of it. I would like the message to be clearer. Maybe it would help to use longer and ...