torsa_n_muse

i found the poem to flow natuarally and thats something i like. the numbness and bleeding you talk of renders a dark, and intense feel which i appreciate. excep[t for ...

this definitely was an entertaining piece and i enjoyed it. but i felt that :idea: it could have a better tiltle- perhaps a shorter one, i cant think of any ...

:D hi! it is a good poem and above all a fresh one. though i thought the message was repeating itself quite some time yet i enjoyed it. and i ...

your poem has chosen a good theme but it is too flat for a literary piece. "Let everyone sing and everyone dance, while she lies in this empty, forgotten room ...

i love this poem. and somehow its the kind of poem i personally appreciate- romantic, full of tender images and of course its like the fond thought which we all ...

hello! i liked your poem. i think it aptly conveys the impulsiveness and feelings that you wanted it too. but personally speaking, i always like poems to more rich in ...

:lol: this poem sounded sick to me. the title and the content have a huge differrence in their feel, i feel! on second thoughts i didnt like the sound of ...

hi! i didnot like some of words that you used. some words of your poem seem to be quite out of the lyric pattern. but the poem has good content ...