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Torrey Culbertson

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    Thanks! I am really not sure how I was able to write this one. Before I wrote this I focused on only rhyming words, but not the flow of it... ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shakespearean Sonnet #8 - The Flame

    WOW! This is really good. Ridiculously good. It reminds me of Shakespeare, but in a much easier version of English. :) The only thing I would change is to take ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Shattered soul

    I just wanted to say that this is really good. I have never had anything happen like this before in my life, but the way you wrote this really kind ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    I really appreciate it when someone helps me to improve... :) You are right, you don't have to be mean to help someone (notice the CONSTRUCTIVE in constructive criticism, not ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    Thank you so much! You don't even know how good that review made me feel. Thanks for the suggestions!

    Oct 1, 2014


See, we could have been called The Shoes.
— Paul McCartney