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Torrey Culbertson

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    Thanks! I am really not sure how I was able to write this one. Before I wrote this I focused on only rhyming words, but not the flow of it... ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shakespearean Sonnet #8 - The Flame

    WOW! This is really good. Ridiculously good. It reminds me of Shakespeare, but in a much easier version of English. :) The only thing I would change is to take ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Shattered soul

    I just wanted to say that this is really good. I have never had anything happen like this before in my life, but the way you wrote this really kind ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    I really appreciate it when someone helps me to improve... :) You are right, you don't have to be mean to help someone (notice the CONSTRUCTIVE in constructive criticism, not ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: When Two Hearts Collide

    Thank you so much! You don't even know how good that review made me feel. Thanks for the suggestions!

    Oct 1, 2014


Powerful men have a way of avoiding consequences.
— Dr. Harrison Wells, The Flash