torreygrace

Hey, this is really good! You got the rhythm of this spot on. The only thing that I might change is to possibly add rhyming. But that could just be ...

Wow. This is really great. I think it would really strengthen this poem if you made it rhyme like in the lines "life that purrs life that stirs" that sounded ...

I am really impressed that you made all of this off of a picture, and in five minutes, never the less! The only thing I can really find wrong with ...