tori1234

Sorry, but I can't give a review because I'm afraid I'll be mean, and I don't want to be mean. The poem was a little too sad for me, life ...

I have to admit that I'm a Twilight Fan. I'm not one of those freaking obsessed girls or anything, I just read because I want to read. I so agree ...

Awwwwwwwww! That was so sweet! I absolutely loved it! Now onto the review: There is really nothing I'd like you to change, except for the fourth line in stanza two, ...

I really liked that, I was surprised that you are 11-years-old! (no offense, my writing totally stunk at 11) Now on to the review: It kind of felt like it ...

oh my gosh! That made me cry! This is probably the best poem I have read about abortion so far! I wish more girls (and guys) would write more poetry ...

Oh my gosh, I absolutely loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is so true, I just wish some certain guys I know would hurry up and read it. Now time for the ...

I really liked that, and I'm glad people are writing poetry about things that are actually important. Just one problem though, the last line in the second stanza sounds a ...

Oh my gosh, that was hilarious! I would so start bursting out laughing at this very moment but my dad is in the other room. So on the inside, I ...

I really like the message you are trying to send us. (I am SO anti-abortion!) But the way the poem flows, it just doesn't seem right. It feels like you're ...

oh my gosh I loved that! It was so beautiful! I just wanted to point out that: In the first stanza, your rhyming is ABAB In the second stanza, it ...

oh my gosh! that was so sad! I almost started crying! Please tell me this is fiction! I don't know if there is anything I want you to change..... Please ...

hey, I really liked this, a little corny, but short, sweet, simple, and to the point. I agree with what Evi said, you need to put all your "and's" on ...

Oh my gosh! I completely loved that! THIS is the kind of poetry this messed up world needs! I love every stanza of it, and I don't think there is ...

It was a little bland for my liking. I think you need to add some more stuff, give some examples of abusive teenage relationships, and maybe even tell about some ...

That was really nice. It did kind of have a little twist in it. You hear most teenagers saying, "I'm nobody", "He doesn't like me", "They don't want me around," ...