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Re: Begin again (here is what i have so far) by Savannah Olivetti
Welp, to begin, CAPITALISE YOUR I'S. It bugged me while reading the whole story, kind of ruining the experience. The plot is really intense though, and though I have no ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: locked up
Hi, It's a good story in terms of imagery. I can feel the man's amazement at the sun, but I do have a problem with that. Was he locked up ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Enjoyed the Company
Hi, I figured I'd give this a review cause I can really relate to this poem and I can feel a lot of the emotion coming through your poem. I ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: Shipwrecked
The description in this story is really good, it almost felt like I was the character. Being a short story, I can't really tell if there is any plot behind ...
Jul 4, 2015