tonytwo

I absolutely loved it! I am a fanatic for anything with swords and spears and this fit the bill. I was actually a bit disappointed that there was no fight ...

This story could have some potential. But i think you rushed it. There was not enough detail like, Where where they, why where they there, how did they kill the ...

I found the begging kinda hard to follow, but once i got to the center everything started to click. She must either be talking to a police officer or a ...

Hey, tonytwo here to review your work. First off i would like to say that i absolutely LOVED the beginning areas of it, and that i really did not expect ...

The story was nice, i jumped in here without reading any prelude or anything and i understand what is going on so kudo's to you. In the sentence " They ...

It was a little short to me but it got to a good point. I liked how you described the area around the character. It seemed demonic like, which probably ...

I enjoyed this poem in an interesting sort of way. First of, I really did not realize it was a poem until around the end (My bad), but when i ...