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I swear, I literally cried when I read this. It reminded me of my childhood. So many emotions washed over me, but it had a good feeling to it. It ...

All I can say is that this was an amazing, well written poem. I have never read such a great poem like this one before. At first, I couldn't tell ...

Oh, my gosh. That was so deep, so inspiring, it captured my heart. It really makes you think how society wants us to be and what we sometimes wants to ...

Wow that was a good chapter. Now I'm not one to nitpick bur I did see a few errors that you might want to look over. But other than that, ...

Wow why stop there? I say keep writing! Leaving the story hanging like that keeps me and other readers wanting more. Grammar, spelling was great. There would only be one ...

So yeah the other reviewers caught the grammar and nick pick stuff like that. I'd say it was great, but you said you don't like people telling you that it's ...

Wow. That's all I can say. That was an amazing beginning. It just yanked me right in and I couldn't stop reading. Grammar, spelling, punctuation, all correct. I found nothing ...

That story was very captivating! From the beginning, it immediately captured my attention. I could not stop reading and now I can't stop waiting. You have to write the next ...

Wow. I'd have to say this was a really good start to your book. Most everyone has picked out my nitpicks, so I'll just say all the good and bad ...

Hmm, what should I say about this? First of all, it's a good story through and through. But you can make the chapters a little longer. That way, you can ...

Now this is a story I'll have fun reading. I believe that you put in just enough to capture anyone who reads this. Besides the things already mentioned in other ...

You know, I really liked the chapter! At first, it seemed like it was out of any old story that you'd pick out of a library, but then it took ...