tigerlover98

Gracias for your reviews. I'm thrilled that you like this, because this is my first poem.

That's a really nice poem. However, just like the comments before, it is a little too short. I'm not going to say a lot, because I'm new to Young Writers ...

Thanks for the review. And your right. Most of the mistakes were typos. The only thing I didn't change is the idea part. I want to keep it simple there.

That was really good. I really like poetry, but I'm really bad at it. I just can't find good rhyming words.