tigeraye

no worries

gotcha, I overlooked that. Thanks.

hemingway weeps with jealousy at this one

Thanks for reading... I tend to think a lot about what it's like to be so old and have everything change, so that's sort of the inspiration

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Being defensive about stories is natural, especially ones with personal connotations, don't worry about it. I'm not the law of the land when it comes to how to write a ...

The trio of worlds refers to Heaven, Hell, and Earth. "Liars singing and singers crying" is a metaphor for twisted people rising above in society while the good people seem ...

thank you for the criticism -- i appreciate your honesty and will look to slow it down the next time i start writing again.

Thanks

Thanks for reviewing

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I wasnt expecting any reviews on this so soon, thanks!

thank you for the review ^^