tigeraye

It's a bit of a conundrum to have the parents eating dinner with the siblings again so soon, after you already emphasized how rare dinners were together. It can be ...

We finally learned the sister's name, a bit of an oddity three chapters in for such an important character, but it's fine. Getting to know the parents a bit more, ...

For the most part, this felt like an extension of chapter one, but it was a fun read nonetheless. I'm glad we started to delve into at least a bit ...

I liked this a lot! It's amazing how despite how little we know about the parents, you've manage to create an aura of mystery around them that makes them interesting. ...

This was an excellent story. The way you lead us on thinking that the main character was getting married, only to learn that she was actually having to go through ...

I think anyone who reads this can only finish with a "wow". If writing erotica is your thing, that's fine, there's a whole market out there and people do make ...

Reading this, I felt like I was reading two different stories at the same time. One was about two teens trying to contemplate 9/11, and the other was your standard ...

Your writing is surprisingly mature. The story itself was very easy to follow -- having the main character refer to others as "Cool Guy", "Blind Guy", etc is a nice ...

You definitely have some good things going here. Early on, the story is captivating, with riveting imagery. I also like the high amount of emotion, it makes for a lively ...

The clock strikes 7:00 AM, a new day begins. A regular boy with a slightly above average height and dark hair wakes up at a regular house in the regular ...

This is a heavy piece of writing. To properly emote the pain and the empathy of someone after they've just lost the love of their life could be challenging to ...

Aw, this was really good. Gliss is an amazing character. I love how you went into a different direction than the first, it keeps it refreshing while still adding amazing ...

Hello. I saw part two of this in the green room and decided to read this before reading that. This was completely fascinating!!! I was hooked the entire time reading ...

Wow, this was quite mesmerizing. Reading the description, I expected some creepy anecdote of casually stalking a woman, but this was far from that. But I digress...the thing I like ...

Wow, this is a great narrative. You have a ton of good things going. I really like the main character -- he's sympathetic, interesting, and above all else, realistic. Actually ...