tigeraye

Hello, MissLyricz, hope everything is going alright. Ah, reading eyes...weren't watering...definitely not... This was a really heartwarming story! I like that you had a clear vision on where you were ...

I like the concept here. A boy trapped in a post-apocalyptic world seems like a really interesting idea to write about, and your sense of detail is very enriching. The ...

TheShauzer covered it very well, so this will ultimately be a short review; you're obviously quite intelligent, and your sophisticated, powerful writing style is very interesting to read. I find ...

Wow...well, I'm going to say that this review is likely going to be nothing but singing your praises, but seriously, this was excellent. I think it really shows just how ...

I guess the plot twist at the end was sort of interesting. There are a ton of spelling and grammar mistakes that distract from the actual story. I hope in ...

Wow. The last scene of the crash was very emotionally impacting, I thought you did an amazing job of capturing the sorrow and fearful scene that unfolded among the plane ...

I thought this was a very amusingly quirky story. Your style of writing lends itself to be a ton of fun for your readers with how "loose" everything is. It ...

“So your mom has it too?” I pondered to the silent boy sitting next to me on the playground bench. I think the word you want here is quiet, not ...

I sat in the leather armchair that had once belonged to my father (whom I neither remember nor care for) and ran my hands through the stubble coating my face. ...

I think the strongest part of this story is your inner monologue; your character's thought process is clearly defined in an intriguingly captivating way, it creates a very powerful narrative ...

Kajal thought he was lying on something soft. He could distantly hear the sound of children singing. That was strange. Had he been reincarnated into a better world? That didn’t ...

Kajal awoke early the next morning, stiff and wondering what to do next. Somehow, he would have to get some food and water for himself and Selma. Water especially. They ...

Hello, welcome to Young Writers Society. This was a nice piece, I enjoyed reading it. But it feels like you summarized a story instead of telling us a story, if ...

This is a nice poem; it has this "epic" feeling to it that you convey strongly through your powerful choice of words. Beneath it is a powerful message that puts ...

I enjoyed reading this a lot, you had me hooked the whole time. I think my favorite thing about it was that there are probably a lot of different ways ...