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Eragon...Wait, we can't say that? OK, uh...hmm...uh... Wow...I think Eragon is the only BAD book I've read.

I was thinking the rythem would be hard to find. You see, the lines are sung rather quickly, and then there's a quick little instrumental break, sort of like the ...

Well, I didn't really find anything that zankoku_na_tenshi didn't catch. Nice work!

Ooh! He should read some romance novels! I don't care if he hurts THAT genre's reputation! Just, dear lord, no more butchered fantasy stories.

Hmm... never heard a song that does this. I'll look up the Christina Agulara song, though. Maybe I'll just replace the bridge with an instrumental break. That might be a ...

This should go in the appropriate literary forum. Under "writing" choose "submit something". You'll bne able to post it then. Oh, and I can tell you right now it looks ...

*rereads* OK, I see how the storyteller could be a different person. You mgiht want to mention Karenna laughing at the storytellers story or something like that in order to ...

Okay, I understand that I am lacking detail. But, what type of detail? Do you want detail on the character? The ships? Can you give me specifics? The characters especially, ...

Oh...yes, I did mean "spread our wings". My bad. I do have a tune, butit does change a little, I'll work on that.

Upadted May 6, 2008. I marked the chorus, verses, and bridge in the song. I made a few minor changes verse 1, the chorus and verse 2 are still the ...

Usually, I spell pretty well. I must be having a bad day. And I seriously couldn't figure out how to spell "beauty". Thanks, now I know. Since I was only ...

You guys certainly aren't as enthusiastic about commenting as before. Chapter 3-Surprises Abound Daniel yawned as he eyes peered open. Morning sunlight was pouring through the entrance to the tent, ...

Name: I'm really bad with picking "normal" names. I have all the people who've read "The Elements" to back me up on this. Do you think Jill or perhaps Elizabeth ...

Meep! I thought I made it obvous enough it was for the main character. I'll edit in his name throughout the story now. Thanks! As for what had happened before ...

*begin's reading Kaurin's critique* *Frowns* *continues* *goes berserk* *cringe* At least he didn't guess what the event was...Did the getting along as kids make it that obvious? Chapter 2 Daniel, ...