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Alright, so she didn't kill him... I think what gave me that impression started with her character - she seems rash enough to do something like that. Second of all, ...

Title? Hmm... "Who I'm Supposed To Be"? Anyway... This was actually very good! As usual, it's hard to find rhythm when you can't hear it, so I found a couple ...

Yes, it's Peeta. But it's pronounced the same. I think so, at least.

Young man/woman, is taken away from home, some friend dies, they save someone etc... Let's see isn't one of these INKHEART...LOTRI...STARWARS....ODYSEUS...MANY OTHER FANTASY/SCIFI STORIES. True. That'

One other thing: It's really annoying to see a character talk like this: Thou art a mighty warrior. and also this: Define normal.

We had to analyze it and compare it to another story, The Lady or the Tiger, in English this year. It's very well written.

My fingers will probably develop a constant moving action That reminded me of Mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium. The woman is a pianist, and that happened to her.

The end of part one is where he says to the [spoiler]crystal merchant, "I need money to buy some sheep." In other words, he's not going to the pyradmids![/spoiler] [spoiler]Though ...

The 2nd and 3rd verses don't rhyme. Other than that, nice work. Amusing. :lol:

I'm sorry. Yes, in general, he was. I was thinking along the lines of "Great Expectations".

I'll have to read that sometime. Your description of him and his writing style makes me think of Dickens. Very innovtive to the point where the general public can't take ...

Oh, we don't mind. That's what this forum is for: Improving our songwriting abilities. We just need to figure out what's wrong with out bad pieces, fix it, and prevent ...

I'm reading Three Cups of Tea by Greg Mortenson now. Sure enough, it's terrible. The first three chapters are about pathetic details about him being stuck on a mountain. It's ...

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I had a conversation with a friend, "Jack", who likes Eragon. I converted him. *** Me: What is it that you like about Eragon? Jack: Maybe the reason you don't ...