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Well, everyone on here is thirteen and up so I don't think it needs to be rated. It isn't too explicit. Anyways onto your review. Go out and have your ...

Hey! We meet again! What a vivid piece! It really allows the reader to imagine and uses some great descriptions. I had a few minor issues with a little things ...

Hey! I'm Tennis. What a sweet little piece you have here! Let's get started. I wanna fly away I would use "I want to fly away" Same with every other ...

Hi There! Here's your review: The oceans were once painted gold, full of hope and wonder. What has happened to the golden seas that we all once knew? Great Hook! ...

Hey There ! Returning the favour of your helpful crit :D ~ ! Let's get to it. I don’t know what I am to do, I cannot stop thinking about ...

KAY WELL FIRST OFF I MUST SAY YOUR PROFILE MADE ME LIFE. Favorite Song: Remembering Sunday-All Time Low hahaha, this is actually one of my fave songs too = ] ...

Hello there ! Welcome to YWS. My name is Tamara. If you need any help, you can PM me anytime = ] Your poem is really sweet. It makes me ...

life in your absence is but a hazy passing days leave amiss and the pain is longlasting the breath is brief the sweet now bitter frail as a leaf in ...

Hi there! I'm tennis! You know, I usually dread these types of poems. I think of them as twilight ripoffs, but this one actually wasn't that bad. Let's get to ...

Hey there! I'm tennis, come to critique your lovely piece and give you some suggestions! PM for anything! I am a ghost in this world I am everywhere where you ...

Hello! I'm Tamara. I was interested by your username so I thought I'd do some reviews for you. tired no chance of sleep good hook wired so that I cant ...

Hey ya ^^ I appreciate this short piece. It shows a good emotion and the sense of being scared to show your true self.. Like you're wearing a mask You ...

I gotta tell ya - I went to review this and couldn't keep reading. I don't mean to be rude but I'm just giving my opinion - after the first ...

This was absolutely amazing. I had almost no trouble reading it and I could see this becoming the beginning of a novel or a follow up short story. For example, ...

Overall, I'd have to say it was pretty good. However, I got the sense that it was something torn out of the pages of a book, the last two pages ...