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  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 3 of 3)

    Hi! Rosie here for another review. Oh man! Something I really enjoy about your work is that you always manage to keep me guessing. You always keep me wanting more, ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 2 of 3)

    Hi again! Rosie here for your second review. WOW WOW WOW! You grabbed from the first word and did not let me up for air until the last! I have ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Literature Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 1 of 3)

    Hi there! Rosie here for a review. I found this piece to be better than I expected. I wasn't exactly sure what to expect by the title, but curiosity got ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: Departures

    Hey! Rosie here for a review. I was really taken with this piece. I love pieces that are inspired by the tiniest random thoughts, songs or events. First off, I ...

    Nov 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three *Revised*

    Wow! Bravo! As usual, Rosie here, ready to review! Sorry it's been so long, love. School has kept me extremely busy. This chapter blew me away, as all your chapters ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two *Revised*

    Rosie here for a review! Wow! Amazing chapter! I'm definitely hooked and eagerly awaiting the next one. I held my breath during your piece basically the whole time. I practically ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One *Revised*

    Rosie here for a review! I will just review as I read, so just bear with me. Your first line is very eye-catching and thought provoking. I actually had to ...

    Aug 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Writer's Block

    Hey there! Rosie here for a review. First of all, I really love what you've done here. You've taken writer's block and you've completely captured the essence of how it ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Shadow

    Wow! Personally, I think you should continue this. Although I knew almost nothing about the girl, I felt like I knew exactly who she was. I loved the thoughtfulness of ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Powers: Mental--Chapter 1

    Hi, there. Rosie here for a review. I’m going to review as I read, so I apologize if it’s a bit messy and chaotic. I admire that you’re able to ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: Matches To Ashes *Chapter One*

    Hi there! Rosie here for a review! I really like this piece, and think it has a lot of potential. I think that you could really flesh out the relationship ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Heather

    Hi there! Rosie here for a review. Wow! This piece is stunningly beautiful. Your grammar is spot on, your imagery and descriptions are wonderful, and your tone is exceptional. Your ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Faking Perfect

    Hey there! Rosie here for a review! I’m going to take this line by line, so I’ll give you my thoughts and suggestions as I go. Keep in mind that ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Spot The Difference: Chapter 01

    Hi! Rosie here for a review. First off, let me just say that this is a really good start. Let's talk about grammar. I think that grammar is your biggest ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Memoirs of a Snack

    Wow! That was really hilarious! I love how you kept it so serious, and made me almost feel bad for the bag of pork rinds. It's actually my guilty pleasure ...

    Sep 4, 2013


“Hope” is the thing with feathers - That perches in the soul - And sings the tune without the words - And never stops - at all -
— Emily Dickinson