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Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 3 of 3)
Hi! Rosie here for another review. Oh man! Something I really enjoy about your work is that you always manage to keep me guessing. You always keep me wanting more, ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 2 of 3)
Hi again! Rosie here for your second review. WOW WOW WOW! You grabbed from the first word and did not let me up for air until the last! I have ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 1 of 3)
Hi there! Rosie here for a review. I found this piece to be better than I expected. I wasn't exactly sure what to expect by the title, but curiosity got ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Departures
Hey! Rosie here for a review. I was really taken with this piece. I love pieces that are inspired by the tiniest random thoughts, songs or events. First off, I ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three *Revised*
Wow! Bravo! As usual, Rosie here, ready to review! Sorry it's been so long, love. School has kept me extremely busy. This chapter blew me away, as all your chapters ...
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two *Revised*
Rosie here for a review! Wow! Amazing chapter! I'm definitely hooked and eagerly awaiting the next one. I held my breath during your piece basically the whole time. I practically ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One *Revised*
Rosie here for a review! I will just review as I read, so just bear with me. Your first line is very eye-catching and thought provoking. I actually had to ...
Aug 9, 2014 -
Re: Writer's Block
Hey there! Rosie here for a review. First of all, I really love what you've done here. You've taken writer's block and you've completely captured the essence of how it ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Shadow
Wow! Personally, I think you should continue this. Although I knew almost nothing about the girl, I felt like I knew exactly who she was. I loved the thoughtfulness of ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Powers: Mental--Chapter 1
Hi, there. Rosie here for a review. I’m going to review as I read, so I apologize if it’s a bit messy and chaotic. I admire that you’re able to ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Matches To Ashes *Chapter One*
Hi there! Rosie here for a review! I really like this piece, and think it has a lot of potential. I think that you could really flesh out the relationship ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: Heather
Hi there! Rosie here for a review. Wow! This piece is stunningly beautiful. Your grammar is spot on, your imagery and descriptions are wonderful, and your tone is exceptional. Your ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Faking Perfect
Hey there! Rosie here for a review! I’m going to take this line by line, so I’ll give you my thoughts and suggestions as I go. Keep in mind that ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Spot The Difference: Chapter 01
Hi! Rosie here for a review. First off, let me just say that this is a really good start. Let's talk about grammar. I think that grammar is your biggest ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Memoirs of a Snack
Wow! That was really hilarious! I love how you kept it so serious, and made me almost feel bad for the bag of pork rinds. It's actually my guilty pleasure ...
Sep 4, 2013
