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I thought the poem was good. It made sense and was about an animal that most people like and have heard of. I personally like the Phoenix, I think it ...

Tu sabes más español que yo. Yo usé un traductor porque no comprendo. Yo no leí todo de lo pero yo voy a leer más luego. ¿De dónde eres?

Okay thank you. I will have angelfire, kyte, blackcat, and someguy look over it before I post.

I think you should add on to it more. It was good though.

Thanks little.angelfire. I will take your advise and take out the airport scene. And, try to make the conversations more real. Also, I will make them longer.

I didn't read all of it. It was kind of confusing and weird and some of it didn't make sense.

I was a little confused about what you were talking about at the end but that always happens to me with poems. I thought it was good though. And, it ...

I thought it was good but, it could use more detail and Hell should be capitalized because it's a place.

I thought it was good, but, I wasn't able to finish it.

I thought it was good. Some things we capitalized, and, I don’t know if they should have been :D

Thanks for reviewing. I will try to make the conversations more interesting. And, I will get rid of the Italian. Do you have any ideas on how to make the ...

Yeah, I don't like smoking either.

I had it set up as a play so, I thought that was how to write it but thanks anyway.

maim? I think you should capitalize your I's.

I liked it.