thestorygirl

This first of all is beautiful. Not really much of a review, but I've been going to Ocracoke since I was two. I totally get where you're coming from.

Yeah I get the whole lacking emotions thing with my poems quite often. I either lack depth in them or there's too much emotion and not enough action. And thanks ...

Yeah I know, I have lots of spelling issues. I think I fixed them.

Another thing. You should add more emotion because it would help me understand how to know who you are. What your different perspective on things is is very helpful in ...

I'm not one for poems like these, but I liked this one. It was captivating - like honey in a jar (hehehe)- I liked it a lot, I would give ...

What can I say? It was sort of eclectic, and about as original as you can get. Seriously, this was one freakin' awesome poem. Was it a poem? I don't ...

The Westing Game. If you ever see it on the shelf at your library, follow these life-saving instructions. Instructions 1. Run away screaming and sue the library for owning that ...

Okay I will reveiw your poem again. Death is that moment when you close your eyes and your heart stops beating. As you lay there your soul flies away to ...

It was enchanting and dark and caught my aye because of it's abnormalty.

And I just wrote Bleed for the heck of it

Recoil is from my point of veiw.

Actually this is from a guys point of veiw. Not mine.

Thanx Coral, Snickerdooly, and TDMitchell. I know my rhyming is really bad. Never tried it so it explains why I'm so horribly bad with it. Anyway, I'll probobly do a ...

I like it a lot. It was dark and very honest. It didn't hide itself like a lot of poems do with it's topics. It was straight forward and beautifully ...

I like it a lot. I know how you\character feels. Actually I'm feeling that way right now. *Dreamily sighs* Dylan... Anyway just want to tell you I love it and ...