therichalder

I love the metaphors in this and similes. The description really lets the reader's mind run wild. Not to mention your grammar is excellent. I can't find a single example ...

Honestly, I really loved this. It seemed rather motivational, which for me is rare to see in poems. My biggest issue is that the commas are kind of off with ...

This is pretty motivational. I don't really relate to it personally, especially since I haven't even experienced the high school part yet, but I still can see where the narrator's ...

Honestly, I really connect to this since this is my school life as well. My writing often tends to follow around my school life too. Your piece really brought out ...

It's pretty interesting how history has a habit of writing stories where people fall in love with humanoid inanimate objects. This, in itself, piques my interest. But I also enjoy ...

Wow, this is awesome! I can see that someone finally has near-flawless grammar. It just gets harder and harder to come by these days. I thought your story was great. ...

Man, I can feel you, girl. I may not have had that happen with me and my old man, but I never even knew him in the first place. He ...

Wow, I just love The Outsiders! I find this take on Randy's POV very interesting. It makes me wonder whether all Socs are like that. It just makes me think ...

Man, what a sadist. I love sadistic characters. Honestly, I have to give you credit for giving some nice rhymes. I kind of find myself wondering what's the story behind ...

Wow, I really loved this... I just wish I knew why Grace was writing to Dee, and why she was saying all that stuff. But it doesn't have much to ...

Hmm.... Short chapter. But I think it was pretty nice! You should add a comma or a period when quotes end, though. I liked the names, and I didn't see ...

I really love Warriors and this is really nice! I have to say, I have a bad habit of looking at names in ever Warriors fanfic I read. I rather ...