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Re: Stardust
Hello! Just wanted to say that this is absolutely breathtaking and a symphony to my mind to read. You did absolutely wonderful and I love this so so much! The ...
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Re: Passion Lost
Hello! First off, I really love this poem. It is beautiful and bittersweet. It has a feel that brings happiness but also brings sadness at the same time. I will ...
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Re: Invisible Chains
Hello! First and foremost, this is absolutely wonderful. It says everything that is left unsaid when writing. Writer's block is no joke and can be very irritating. The rhymes are ...
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Re: Soulmate
Hello!! Just wanted to say that this is absolutely beautiful and I'm glad to have read it. It almost makes me cry because it is truly and unbelievably deep in ...
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Re: A Sweet Promise
I really love the imagery, it puts a beautiful and captivating scene in mind. There is a slight confusion of why most of the poem rhymes but some parts do ...
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Re: The Last Ones - chapter 1
Hello! Alright first off, great read and very enticing! I read it and I was slightly confused because of the amount of things going on. I was also confused about ...
Sep 4, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 1: Tryst With Destiny
First of all, love, love, love the imagery. It's as if I was standing there watching everything unfold. I can't really find any room for improvement. There's a very good ...
Sep 4, 2023
