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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stardust

    Hello! Just wanted to say that this is absolutely breathtaking and a symphony to my mind to read. You did absolutely wonderful and I love this so so much! The ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Passion Lost

    Hello! First off, I really love this poem. It is beautiful and bittersweet. It has a feel that brings happiness but also brings sadness at the same time. I will ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Invisible Chains

    Hello! First and foremost, this is absolutely wonderful. It says everything that is left unsaid when writing. Writer's block is no joke and can be very irritating. The rhymes are ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Soulmate

    Hello!! Just wanted to say that this is absolutely beautiful and I'm glad to have read it. It almost makes me cry because it is truly and unbelievably deep in ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Sweet Promise

    I really love the imagery, it puts a beautiful and captivating scene in mind. There is a slight confusion of why most of the poem rhymes but some parts do ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Last Ones - chapter 1

    Hello! Alright first off, great read and very enticing! I read it and I was slightly confused because of the amount of things going on. I was also confused about ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 1: Tryst With Destiny

    First of all, love, love, love the imagery. It's as if I was standing there watching everything unfold. I can't really find any room for improvement. There's a very good ...

    Sep 4, 2023


I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss