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lol...i find humour in this piece, i like it.

hello...thnx for the review, this was a quick draft, un edited. let me see how to re do it following your points... my keyboard also tends to make everything lowercase, ...

hello...thnx for the review, this was a quick draft, un edited. let me see how to re do it following your points... my keyboard also tends to make everything lowercase, ...

hello...thnx for the review, this was a quick draft, un edited. let me see how to re do it following your points... my keyboard also tends to make everything lowercase, ...

it was more of a comment but couldn't let the 50points go unattended...lol

it was more of a comment but couldn't let the 50points go unattended...lol

it was more of a comment but couldn't let the 50points go unattended...lol

it was more of a comment but couldn't let the 50points go unattended...lol

what happened to the pic.? sorry everyone, the upload had a pic... apparently it didn't make it through the publishing process!

Ooh and jim-nock did expect something paranormal, nothing in perticular but time travel just happened to be it. Ths novel has subchapters between every chapter each different from the main ...

Jim-nock is in ancient lands, he doesn't know where he is but wonders around hopping to find civilization, in ths case the city gates. The cave and forest are one, ...

Thanks, i'll have to read through before publishing!

Yes, i would like to be tagged for the next chapter,.. :-P

Ohh, okay, i missed that one!

I perticulary like your ending. It shows how you find solace in you imagination. I also do that some times, reminds me of a piece i published some time back ...